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Through all my 18 years, I’ve always been a persistent person. I never let obstacles get in my way because I believe they will open a lot of opportunities for learning. This attitude, combined with my desire to pursue a career in the medical field, helped me figure out my dream — to become an immunologist. As a very determined person, my goal is to make significant contributions in the field of immunology. I am specifically interested in finding ways to improve the conditions of people with autoimmune diseases. Getting into the medical school of my dreams is definitely the right step towards my goal.
I. Why a career in medical school is perfect for me
A. Traits that make me a perfect medical practitioner – As a student, I’ve always been a determined individual and an achiever, and I believe in the importance of education. I’m also a multi-tasker, a team player, well-organized, and a committed person. I also have a positive outlook in life. I am personally interested in the field of immunology.
B. Skills and achievements – I have excellent computer skills. Some of my achievements include the 2010 Sekolah Menengah Sains Tuanku Jaafar SPM 2009 Excellence Award.
II. Why I want to become an immunologist
A. What immunology is for me – For me, the field of immunology presents plenty of opportunities for research. Today, there are still some autoimmune diseases that are not well-understood. Because of this, healthcare for people with serious autoimmune diseases are limited. I want to help people with autoimmune diseases achieve better life quality through proper diagnosis and effective treatment.
B. Contributions I can make to my society as an immunologist – As an immunologist, I wish to provide better lifestyle and medical care options for people with autoimmune diseases.
III. Why _______ is the right school for me
A. _________ as the right school for me – This institution is known for its high quality medical education. The medical faculty of this school is also known for its highly experienced members in various medical fields.
